Mock Advertisement

I recently created a mock video advertisement for fun, centered around one idea: making cereal the wrong way. In the span of two days, I lit, shot, and edited the ad. I really like how it came out, but I realized something while creating it.
There's no purpose if it's not intentional. The idea needs to be cohesive from beginning to end. I re-edited it using a different sequence and clips several times, just to make sure it flowed as well as it could have.